Friday, March 15, 2019

17B – Elevator Pitch No. 2


I have described what I changed in this pitch, given the feedback I received last time.

  • I tried to sound less robot and not read from a script as well as interacting with items in order to make give the pitch a touch.

1 comment:

  1. Awesome job! Great eye contact, business attire, and smooth transitions. Next tie I just recommend better lighting to make your video more clear for your audience. Overall, really great communication of the idea and I can clearly see the improvements.

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